Title III Technology Literacy Challenge Grant

Learning Unit

LU Title: OUT OF THIS WORLD WRITING!

Author(s): Kate Connolly

Grade Level: 3-4

School Address: Herkimer County BOCES

Gros Blvd. Herkimer, NY 13350

Topic/Subject Area: ELA writing

School Phone/Fax: (315) 867-2000

 

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OVERVIEW

This is a writing unit for students in third or fourth grades. It is used in preparation for the New York State 4th grade ELA Assessment, by using graphic organizers and creating a piece of writing from the organizer. While the planets of the solar system are being researched, students are not being assessed on their knowledge of the planets. The writing process, mechanics, report writing, and the compare contrast essay are being taught and assessed. This unit takes 3-4 weeks to complete. It can be adapted to be used with topics other than planets, such as states, countries, presidents, people in the news, etc.

CONTENT KNOWLEDGE

Declarative

Procedural

  • identify different resources for researching
  • use strategies for note taking
  • know and understand capitalization skills
  • use the writing process
  • know and understand punctuation skills
  • gather research from various sources (internet, books, CD ROM’s, magazines)
  • know and understand prewriting, drafting, revising, and proofreading
  • present information clearly in report form
 
  • write compare/contrast essay
 
  • write persuasive letter
 
  • classification
  • comparison

ESSENTIAL QUESTION

  • What are the steps in the writing process?
  • How do you present information clearly in a report?
  • What different resources can be used to research information for a report?
  • How do you present information clearly in a compare/contrast essay?
  • Can you observe basic writing conventions such as capitalization and punctuation?

 

 

CONNECTIONS TO NYS LEARNING STANDARDS

(List Standard # and Key Idea #: Write out related Performance Indicators or Benchmarks.)

 

English Language Arts

 

Standard 1: Language for Information and Understanding

Students will listen, speak, read, and write for information and

understanding. As listeners and readers, students will collect data, facts, and ideas; discover relationships, concepts, and

generalizations; and use knowledge generated from oral, written, and electronically produced texts. As speakers and writers, they will use oral and written language that follows the accepted conventions of the English language to acquire, interpret, apply, and transmit information.

 

 

ELA Standard 1: Students will read, write, listen and speak for information.

· gather and interpret information form children’s reference books, magazines, textbooks, media

· select information appropriate to the purpose of their investigation and relate ideas from one text to another

· select and use strategies for note taking

· present information clearly in a variety of oral and written forms such as summaries, paraphrases, brief reports

· use the process of prewriting, drafting, revising, and proofreading

 

Standard 2: Information Systems Students will access, generate, process, and transfer information using appropriate technologies.

· access needed information from printed media, electronic data bases, and community

resources

· demonstrate ability to evaluate information

 

 

INITIATING ACTIVITY

 

Read The Magic School Bus Explores Outer Space to the class. When finished point out the pictures of the reports done by the students in Miss Frizzle’s class in the book and tell the class they will be writing even better reports about a planet. Using think, pair, share, complete the K part of the KWL chart using what was learned from the book and prior knowledge about an assigned planet.

 

 

LEARNING EXPERIENCES

(In chronological order including acquisition experiences and extending/refining

experiences for all stated declarative and procedural knowledge.)

 

Using numbered heads discuss ways students know to get information. In a full group discussion complete word map categorizing materials (books, computers, other).

 

Review capitalization skills using concept attainment (examples, non-examples).

 

Using pairs check, have students correctly punctuate list of unpunctuated sentences or passages.

 

Use LINKS strategy for note taking. (Listen, Identify cues, Note, Key words, Stack into outline or graphic organizer)

 

Students will complete central idea graph to show and define steps in writing process. As steps of the writing process are taught, (steps for teaching process are attached) work from students will be collected, and feedback will be given to students. As revisions are made, notes will be taken on how students planned, drafted, proofread, and revised. This will be the teachers’ observation assessment of the writing process.

 

Students will use LINKS strategy for note taking on the planet they are assigned to research using CD ROM (Encarta, The Magic School Bus, Wonders of Learning: The Solar System, ) internet web sites ( ) , text books, magazines, library books, videos (Magic School Bus Gets Lost in Space, Launch Box Series, Bill Nye, ). Then complete gathering grid.

 

 

 

EXTENDING AND REFINING ACTIVITIES

 

Students will CLASSIFY specific attributes of an assigned planet using a Gathering Grid. Then they will write a report.

 

Students will COMPARE their report on a specific planet with a teacher written report on the planet Earth and complete an open compare/contrast organizer. Students will then write a compare and contrast essay.

 

 

 

CULMINATING PERFORMANCE

(Include rubrics, checklists, etc.)

 

 

Explain to each student that his or her planet has a certain phenomenon. (Ex. Jupiter has a large red spot. Saturn is known for its rings. Mars is red in color.) Using EXPERIMENTAL INQUIRY, students are to explain to a group why this phenomenon exists. In a short presentation to the class they are to describe the phenomenon, state the reason it exists and explain how they found out why it exists.



 

PRE-REQUISITE SKILLS

 

This unit is intended to prepare students for the New York State English Language Arts Fourth Grade Assessment. Sentence writing skills and journal writing should be practiced and assessed to determine the pace to take in this lesson. Also, word processing skills are not addressed in this unit. It may be necessary to address this earlier or add word processing lessons within the unit.

 

 

MODIFICATIONS/ADAPTIONS

Modifications may be necessary for at risk students or those that have some difficulty with their writing skills. More time may be needed during the drafting stage. The teacher may act as a scribe in the early stages, especially if this is the first attempt at report or essay writing. A sample report may be given to the students. Also, it may help to give the students specific information research. This could be written out by the teacher in the students’ copy of the gathering grid. (Ex. How many miles from the sun is Saturn? What is the temperature on the surface of Mars?)

The Solar System was used as the topic of research in this unit, but that may also be changed easily. This was a high interest topic at the time with my class, but many subjects may be used since the primary focus here is the ELA standards. It may be used in conjunction with science or social studies units. (Presidents, states, countries,)

 

UNIT SCHEDULE/TIME PLAN

This unit may take three weeks to complete. It may be broken up this way.

 

Week 1: Researching, note taking, reviewing capitalization and punctuation skills.

 

Week 2: Writing process, report

 

Week 3: Writing process, compare and contrast essay, culminating performance

 

 

 

 

TECHNOLOGY USE

 

CD-ROM’s for researching information

(Orbits 3.0:Voyage Through the Solar System, The Magic School Bus Explores the Solar System, A View from the Earth, Wonders of Learning: Explore the Solar System)

 

Word processing reports and information

 

Internet sites for researching

(http://www.yahooligans.com/Science_and_Nature/The_Earth/Space/ has hundreds of sites for kids on space. Many of these sites also contain links.)

 

 

 

EXTENSIONS



This writing unit may be used within a science unit on the solar system. If so, you may want to assess the MST Standards. The following is a list of some activities you may want to include in your unit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

RUBRICS

 

EXPERIMENTAL INQUIRY TASK RUBRIC

 

Task Components

4 pts.

3 pts.

2 pts.

1 pt.

Makes Prediction

Makes logical prediction that fully supports the given facts.

Makes a prediction that may in some cases support the given facts.

Makes a prediction which may not reflect the understanding of the given facts.

Makes no prediction without assistance.

Tests Prediction

Completely carries out the designed activity. May even add to the activity.

Carries out the designed activity sufficiently to get results.

Carries out a portion of the designed activity. May not have accurate results.

Incompletely carries out the designed activity even with assistance.

Evaluates Outcome

Fully explains the results of the activity in light of the prediction. May add new insights into the results.

Adequately explains the results of the activity in light of the prediction.

Explains the results in a general way but may leave out some important results in light of the prediction.

Inaccurately explains the results in light of the prediction.

 

COMPARE/CONTRAST RUBRIC

Task Component

4 pts.

3 pts.

2 pts.

1 pt.

Opening

Creatively begins with and interesting lead that thoroughly identifies the people, places or events as well as the central idea being examined.

Begins with and interesting lead that thoroughly identifies the people, places or events as well as the central idea being examined.

Begins with an opening lead that just identifies the people, places, or events being examined OR just identifies the central idea.

Begins with an opening lead that does not identify the people, places, or events being examined nor does it identify the central idea.

Organization

Effectively and accurately organizes the material in the correct compare/contrast pattern.

Accurately organizes the material in the correct compare/contrast pattern.

Organizes the material in a compare/contrast pattern but varies the pattern throughout the writing.

Material is organized into a pattern that compares the items but does not contrast the items.

Support

Provides well developed and accurate support for each component being examined with the people, places or events.

Provides accurate support for each component being examined with the people, places or events.

Provides some support that is accurate but also has some inaccurate support for the components being examined.

Provides little if any support for the components being examined.

Conclusion

Constructs a thorough closure to the writing that follows logically from the opening lead.

Constructs an appropriate closure to the writing that follows logically from the opening lead.

Constructs a closure that somewhat follows logically from the opening lead - may not be fully explained.

Constructs a closure that does not follow logically from the opening lead.

REPORT RUBRIC

Task Component

4 pts.

3 pts.

2 pts.

1 pt.

Information

Effectively gathers information from a variety of sources. Has a unusually wide range of sources.

Effectively gathers information from a variety of sources. Has a range of sources.

Gathers information from different but similar sources. Has limited range of sources- tending to be primarily books.

Gathers information from one source primarily.

Assessment

Accurately selects information that meets the purpose of the report. All information in the report meets purpose.

Accurately selects information that meets the purpose of the report. Only a few minor details stray from the purpose.

Selects some information that meets the purpose of the report but also includes other information which is inappropriate.

Selects information without regard to the purpose of the report. Much information is inappropriate based upon the original purpose.

Support

Provides factual examples, details to enhance the report while effectively maintaining an opinion-free report.

Provides factual examples, details to enhance the report while adequately maintaining an opinion-free report.

Provides some factual details, examples, while other details and examples are opinions. The report does not remain free of opinions.

Provides few if any factual details or examples. Report is written from an opinion stand point - not factual.

Format

Organizes the information logically while accurately and completely noting all the sources used.

Organizes the information logically while accurately and completely noting most of the sources used.

Organizes the information logically while completely but not accurately noting all the sources used.

Information is not organized in a logical manner and the sources used are not completely or accurately noted.

Conclusion

Effectively unifies the report by concluding with an idea or statement that clearly reinforces the purpose.

Adequately unifies the report by concluding with an idea or statement that somewhat reinforces the purpose.

Attempts to unify the report by concluding with an idea or statement that reinforces the purpose but the conclusion falls short.

No concluding statement is present, or if one, it does not clearly reinforce the purpose of the report.