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LU Title: OUT OF THIS WORLD WRITING! |
Author(s): Kate Connolly |
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Grade Level: 3-4 |
School Address: Herkimer County
BOCES Gros Blvd. Herkimer, NY 13350 |
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Topic/Subject Area: ELA writing |
School Phone/Fax: (315) 867-2000 |
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Email: |
OVERVIEW
This is a writing unit for
students in third or fourth grades. It is used in preparation for the New York
State 4th grade ELA Assessment, by using graphic organizers and
creating a piece of writing from the organizer. While the planets of the solar
system are being researched, students are not being assessed on their knowledge
of the planets. The writing process, mechanics, report writing, and the compare
contrast essay are being taught and assessed. This unit takes 3-4 weeks to
complete. It can be adapted to be used with topics other than planets, such as
states, countries, presidents, people in the news, etc.
CONTENT KNOWLEDGE
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Declarative |
Procedural |
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ESSENTIAL QUESTION
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CONNECTIONS TO NYS LEARNING
STANDARDS
(List Standard # and Key Idea
#: Write out related Performance Indicators or Benchmarks.)
English Language Arts
Standard 1: Language for
Information and Understanding
Students will listen, speak,
read, and write for information and
understanding. As listeners
and readers, students will collect data, facts, and ideas; discover
relationships, concepts, and
generalizations; and use
knowledge generated from oral, written, and electronically produced texts. As
speakers and writers, they will use oral and written language that follows the
accepted conventions of the English language to acquire, interpret, apply, and
transmit information.
ELA Standard 1: Students will read,
write, listen and speak for information.
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gather and interpret information form children’s reference books,
magazines, textbooks, media
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select information appropriate to the purpose of their investigation and relate
ideas from one text to another
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select and use strategies for note taking
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present information clearly in a variety of oral and written forms such as
summaries, paraphrases, brief reports
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the process of prewriting, drafting, revising, and proofreading
Standard 2: Information Systems Students
will access, generate, process, and transfer information using appropriate
technologies.
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access needed information from printed media, electronic data bases, and
community
resources
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demonstrate ability to evaluate information
INITIATING
ACTIVITY
Read The Magic School Bus
Explores Outer Space to the class. When finished point out the pictures of
the reports done by the students in Miss Frizzle’s class in the book and
tell the class they will be writing even better reports about a planet. Using
think, pair, share, complete the K part of the KWL chart
using what was learned from the book and prior knowledge about an assigned
planet.
LEARNING EXPERIENCES
(In chronological order
including acquisition experiences and extending/refining
experiences for all stated
declarative and procedural knowledge.)
Using numbered heads discuss ways
students know to get information. In a full group discussion complete word
map categorizing materials (books, computers, other).
Review capitalization skills using
concept attainment (examples, non-examples).
Using pairs check, have students
correctly punctuate list of unpunctuated sentences or passages.
Use LINKS strategy for note taking.
(Listen, Identify cues, Note, Key words, Stack into outline or graphic
organizer)
Students will complete central idea
graph to show and define steps in writing process. As steps of the writing
process are taught, (steps for teaching process are attached) work from
students will be collected, and feedback will be given to students. As
revisions are made, notes will be taken on how students planned, drafted,
proofread, and revised. This will be the teachers’ observation assessment
of the writing process.
Students will use LINKS strategy for
note taking on the planet they are assigned to research using CD ROM (Encarta,
The Magic School Bus, Wonders of Learning: The Solar System, ) internet web
sites ( ) , text books, magazines, library books, videos (Magic School Bus Gets
Lost in Space, Launch Box Series, Bill Nye, ). Then complete gathering
grid.
EXTENDING
AND REFINING ACTIVITIES
Students will
CLASSIFY specific attributes of an assigned planet using a Gathering Grid. Then
they will write a report.
Students will
COMPARE their report on a specific planet with a teacher written report on the
planet Earth and complete an open compare/contrast organizer. Students will
then write a compare and contrast essay.
CULMINATING PERFORMANCE
(Include rubrics, checklists,
etc.)
Explain to each student that
his or her planet has a certain phenomenon. (Ex. Jupiter has a large red spot.
Saturn is known for its rings. Mars is red in color.) Using EXPERIMENTAL
INQUIRY, students are to explain to a group why this phenomenon exists. In
a short presentation to the class they are to describe the phenomenon, state
the reason it exists and explain how they found out why it exists.
PRE-REQUISITE SKILLS
This unit is intended to
prepare students for the New York State English Language Arts Fourth Grade
Assessment. Sentence writing skills and journal writing should be practiced and
assessed to determine the pace to take in this lesson. Also, word processing
skills are not addressed in this unit. It may be necessary to address this
earlier or add word processing lessons within the unit.
MODIFICATIONS/ADAPTIONS
Modifications may be
necessary for at risk students or those that have some difficulty with their
writing skills. More time may be needed during the drafting stage. The teacher
may act as a scribe in the early stages, especially if this is the first
attempt at report or essay writing. A sample report may be given to the
students. Also, it may help to give the students specific information research.
This could be written out by the teacher in the students’ copy of the
gathering grid. (Ex. How many miles from the sun is Saturn? What is the
temperature on the surface of Mars?)
The Solar System was used as
the topic of research in this unit, but that may also be changed easily. This
was a high interest topic at the time with my class, but many subjects may be
used since the primary focus here is the ELA standards. It may be used in
conjunction with science or social studies units. (Presidents, states,
countries,)
UNIT
SCHEDULE/TIME PLAN
This unit may take three
weeks to complete. It may be broken up this way.
Week 1: Researching, note
taking, reviewing capitalization and punctuation skills.
Week 2: Writing process,
report
Week 3: Writing process,
compare and contrast essay, culminating performance
TECHNOLOGY
USE
CD-ROM’s for
researching information
(Orbits 3.0:Voyage Through
the Solar System, The Magic School Bus Explores the Solar System, A View from
the Earth, Wonders of Learning: Explore the Solar System)
Word processing reports and
information
Internet sites for
researching
(http://www.yahooligans.com/Science_and_Nature/The_Earth/Space/ has hundreds of sites for kids on space. Many of these
sites also contain links.)
EXTENSIONS
This writing unit may be used
within a science unit on the solar system. If so, you may want to assess the
MST Standards. The following is a list of some activities you may want to
include in your unit.
RUBRICS
EXPERIMENTAL INQUIRY TASK
RUBRIC
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Task Components |
4 pts. |
3 pts. |
2 pts. |
1 pt. |
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Makes Prediction |
Makes logical prediction that fully supports the given facts. |
Makes a prediction that may in some cases support the given facts. |
Makes a prediction which may not reflect the understanding of the given facts. |
Makes no prediction without assistance. |
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Tests Prediction |
Completely carries out the designed activity. May even add to the activity. |
Carries out the designed activity sufficiently to get results. |
Carries out a portion of the designed activity. May not have accurate results. |
Incompletely carries out the designed activity even with assistance. |
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Evaluates Outcome |
Fully explains the results of the activity in light of the prediction. May add new insights into the results. |
Adequately explains the results of the activity in light of the prediction. |
Explains the results in a general way but may leave out some important results in light of the prediction. |
Inaccurately explains the results in light of the prediction. |
COMPARE/CONTRAST RUBRIC
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Task Component |
4 pts. |
3 pts. |
2 pts. |
1 pt. |
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Opening |
Creatively begins with and interesting lead that thoroughly identifies the people, places or events as well as the central idea being examined. |
Begins with and interesting lead that thoroughly identifies the people, places or events as well as the central idea being examined. |
Begins with an opening lead that just identifies the people, places, or events being examined OR just identifies the central idea. |
Begins with an opening lead that does not identify the people, places, or events being examined nor does it identify the central idea. |
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Organization |
Effectively and accurately organizes the material in the correct compare/contrast pattern. |
Accurately organizes the material in the correct compare/contrast pattern. |
Organizes the material in a compare/contrast pattern but varies the pattern throughout the writing. |
Material is organized into a pattern that compares the items but does not contrast the items. |
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Support |
Provides well developed and accurate support for each component being examined with the people, places or events. |
Provides accurate support for each component being examined with the people, places or events. |
Provides some support that is accurate but also has some inaccurate support for the components being examined. |
Provides little if any support for the components being examined. |
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Conclusion |
Constructs a thorough closure to the writing that follows logically from the opening lead. |
Constructs an appropriate closure to the writing that follows logically from the opening lead. |
Constructs a closure that somewhat follows logically from the opening lead - may not be fully explained. |
Constructs a closure that does not follow logically from the opening lead. |
REPORT RUBRIC
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Task Component |
4 pts. |
3 pts. |
2 pts. |
1 pt. |
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Information |
Effectively gathers information from a variety of sources. Has a unusually wide range of sources. |
Effectively gathers information from a variety of sources. Has a range of sources. |
Gathers information from different but similar sources. Has limited range of sources- tending to be primarily books. |
Gathers information from one source primarily. |
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Assessment |
Accurately selects information that meets the purpose of the report. All information in the report meets purpose. |
Accurately selects information that meets the purpose of the report. Only a few minor details stray from the purpose. |
Selects some information that meets the purpose of the report but also includes other information which is inappropriate. |
Selects information without regard to the purpose of the report. Much information is inappropriate based upon the original purpose. |
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Support |
Provides factual examples, details to enhance the report while effectively maintaining an opinion-free report. |
Provides factual examples, details to enhance the report while adequately maintaining an opinion-free report. |
Provides some factual details, examples, while other details and examples are opinions. The report does not remain free of opinions. |
Provides few if any factual details or examples. Report is written from an opinion stand point - not factual. |
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Format |
Organizes the information logically while accurately and completely noting all the sources used. |
Organizes the information logically while accurately and completely noting most of the sources used. |
Organizes the information logically while completely but not accurately noting all the sources used. |
Information is not organized in a logical manner and the sources used are not completely or accurately noted. |
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Conclusion |
Effectively unifies the report by concluding with an idea or statement that clearly reinforces the purpose. |
Adequately unifies the report by concluding with an idea or statement that somewhat reinforces the purpose. |
Attempts to unify the report by concluding with an idea or statement that reinforces the purpose but the conclusion falls short. |
No concluding statement is present, or if one, it does not clearly reinforce the purpose of the report. |


