Overview | Content Knowledge | Essential Questions | Connection To Standards | Initiating Activity | Learning Experiences | Culminating Performance | Pre-Requisite Skills | Modifications | Schedule/Time Plan | Technology Use
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LU Title: Lost Lyrics of Love, Lust, and Losers |
Author(s): Jonathan Cornue |
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Grade Level: 12 |
School : Rossetti Learning Center, Madison-Oneida BOCES |
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Topic/Subject Area: English Poetry |
Address: 4937 Spring Road, P.O. Box 168, Verona, NY 13478-0168 |
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Phone/Fax:(315)361-5715/(315)361-5880 |
The term "poetry" is typically feared and despised by high school students, including those who have been exposed to it in previous grades. Initially, the key to this unit is to provide students with a connection between poetry and the "real world". Students will then be reminded of the elements used in poetic interpretation, and use them to analyze various texts. The final element involves research, and is truly the focus of the unit. It will be used to increase the students' analytical and organizational abilities, and introduce them to the "New Historical" (as opposed to the standard "New Critical") method of interpreting the text. Instilling the proverbial "love" for lyricism may not be possible, but we can teach them an appreciation for the art itself.
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Declarative |
Procedural |
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Define elements of poetry |
Interpret poetry styles |
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Identify at least 5 styles of poetry |
Write poems |
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Identify the works of at least 5 poets |
Research a poet's life and era |
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Identify the steps of a research paper |
Use internet for research |
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Recite information on a poet's life and era |
Interpret a poem using New Critical and New Historical methods |
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Identify the difference between New Critical and New Historical poetic analysis |
Write and edit a research paper |
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Define critical interpretation |
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ESSENTIAL QUESTIONS
Why is poetry an important part of a society?
How does poetry reflect the times?
How does the Internet influence our learning?
Why might different critics use different forms of interpretation?
CONNECTIONS TO NYS LEARNING STANDARDS
List Standard # and Key
Idea #: Write out related Performance Indicator(s) or Benchmark(s)
MST #2, Key idea #1:
ELA #1: Language for Information and Understanding
ELA #2: Language for Literary Response and Expression
ELA #3: Language for Critical Analysis and Evaluation
ELA #4: Language for Social Interaction
Students will sit in circles of 6-8. The teacher will provide each child with a piece of paper folded over seven times (so that it is about 1¼" x 8½"), then re-opened.
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The teacher will provide the students with the following instructions: |
"Listen to the following musical excerpts. After the first one, you will write an original, creative phrase or sentence based on that piece of music. This is to be written just BELOW the first crease on the paper in front of you. Then, you will fold the top piece of the paper down so that your line cannot be seen, and pass the paper to your right. We will then listen to another piece of music, and you will respond to that on the paper you just received, and pass THAT one to the right, and so on. Try to use imagery, but remember that you will only have 30 seconds after each piece has stopped to write your phrase and pass the paper."
At this point the teacher should quickly review imagery, and then demonstrate the process. Below is an example of the demonstration.
Lyrics from Pink Floyd's song "Mother" "Hush, my baby, baby, don't you cry. Momma's gonna make all of your nightmares come true. Momma's gonna put all of her fears into you. Momma's gonna keep you right here under her wing. She won't let you fly, but she might let you sing. Momma's gonna keep Baby cozy and warm. Oooo Babe."
Original Line Based on "Mother" The midnight moonlight had faded, and the starlight's shine sank beneath the assault of the fast, furious clouds.
Point out to the students that the music and lyrics only PROMPTED the line. Therefore, not understanding the words does not limit their responses. Have students listen to eight (to allow for an occasional 'mind blank') "snippets" of songs based on "love", without telling them of the common theme. The students should continue to fold and pass the papers to their right until they are filled. After the filled pages are collected, the teacher should follow the same format using eight songs of "lust", and eight of "losers" (in life, love, luck, et al). Each section of song should be no longer then 30 seconds, and the students are only allowed an additional 30 seconds to write their line before passing the paper.
After the works have all been collected, pass them back to a DIFFERENT group. Each student will receive three unfolded "poems". Ask the students to read through the works in front of them, and choose their favorite to read aloud to the class, announcing a possible main idea, or theme. Be prepared for the silly, as often the lines simply do not flow together well.
If well planned and executed, this part of the lesson should take about 38-40 minutes: 3-4 minutes introduction and demonstration, 24 minutes music and writing, 10 minutes reading aloud, and an extra few shuffling the papers back and forth. Eliminating a selection or two from each section will obviously shorten the lesson. During the final few minutes of class, the teacher should indicate the fun that can be had with writing lyrics, and link poetry into the popular music culture.
Below are a list of artists and songs that you may wish to use. PREVIEW ALL MUSIC CAREFULLY!
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Performer |
Love |
Lust |
Losers |
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Queen |
Crazy Little Thing Called Love |
Lover Boy |
I Want to Break Free |
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Nine Inch Nails |
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Get Down, Make Love |
Head Like a Hole |
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Van Halen |
Love Walks In |
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Tori Amos |
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Little Earthquakes |
Me and a Gun |
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Sting |
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Moon Over Bourbon Street |
Synchronicity |
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Billy Joel |
Tell Her About It |
Keepin' the Faith |
Christie Lee |
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Eric Clapton |
Wonderful Tonight |
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John Cougar |
Cherry Bomb |
Hurts so Good |
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Shania Twain |
Still the One |
You Have a Way with Me |
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Toby Keith |
How Do You Like Me Now? |
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'N'Sync |
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Bye, Bye, Bye |
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Six Pence None the Richer |
Kiss Me |
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Madonna |
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Like a Virgin |
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Harry Connick, Jr. |
It Had to Be You |
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BB King |
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The Thrill Is Gone |
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LEARNING
EXPERIENCES
In
chronological order including acquisition experiences and extending/refining
experiences for all stated declarative and procedural knowledge.
PART I. --NEW CRITICAL ANALYSIS
Part I. Lesson 1
Element ------------------- Definition ---------------- Example ---------------------------------------
Imagery
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Onomatopoeia
Hyperbole
Synecdoche
Alliteration
Assonance
Consonance
End Rhyme
Rhyme Scheme
Tone
Mood
Theme
Speaker
Rhythm
-iamb
-trochee
-anapest
-dactyl
-spondee
-pyrrhic
Work with students to define each of the above terms (with which they should already be familiar), and to create an example. As a practice, have the students write Original/Music in the space to the right of Example on the worksheet. With any time remaining in class, and for homework, have the students either create an original example of as many of the terms as possible, AND/OR find them in the lyrics of their songs. Do not expect this to be finished. They are to complete as many as possible, but this is only a review so that they have the opportunity to re-familiarize themselves with the terms and their functions.
Part I. Lesson 2
Poetry can be broken down into various styles, based primarily on line count, rhythm, rhyme, and content. Give the following diagram.
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POETRY |
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VERSE |
NARRATIVE |
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Elegy |
Free Verse |
Blank Verse |
Ode |
Sonnet |
Ballad |
Epic |
Part I. Lesson 3
QUIZ -- What is the predominant rhythm in "O Captain! My Captain"? What is the general rhyme scheme in "The Road Not Taken"? Name the poetic style of each work.
Iambic rhythms: "The bábbling bróok begán to bénd."
Iambic with spondaic: "The bábbling bróok bént báck."
Discuss the differences in the phrases.
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POETIC ANALYSIS |
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Directions: Complete the following worksheet as it relates to the poem you have been given. Be certain to include line numbers. |
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Style of Poem: Why do you feel it was chosen?
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Rhythm: Style(s)/Importance:
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Rhyme Scheme: Importance:
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Sound Elements and their Importance (Alliteration, etc.):
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Figurative Language Elements and their Importance (Similes, Metaphors, etc.):
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What theme(s) do you think the poet was presenting to the reader?
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GROUP WORK RUBRIC |
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QUALITY LEVEL |
4 |
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2 |
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Originality: the extent to which a student brings his/her own ideas to the group. |
Student initiates ideas for the group to discuss |
Student is quick to understand ideas and add to them |
Student has few original ideas; mostly depends on the group |
Student demonstrates no original thought; carried by group. |
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Participation: the extent to which a student assists in the group's assignment |
Aids in leading group discussion |
Discusses ideas, but does not aid in leading |
Aids very little in making group decisions |
Shows no effort; content to let others do the work |
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Cooperation: the extent to which each student works with others in the group. |
Listens well to others; helps them grasp difficult ideas |
Listens to others in the group; makes some attempt to help |
Bullying with ideas or generally unresponsive |
Unresponsive or disruptive
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Use of Time: the extent to which a student effectively uses time in the group. |
Entirely focussed on the task at hand |
Mostly focussed, but drifts occasionally |
"Chatty" or "spacey", easily diverted from the appropriate topic |
Completely of task |
Part I. Lesson 4
PART II. -- RESEARCH PAPER & NEW HISTORICAL ANALYSIS
Part II. Lesson 1
Part II. Lesson 2
HANDOUT 1
Periodic and Biographical Research Paper
Historical information relating to a poet and his or her time often provides the interpreter with sources that enhance the understanding of the poem. Two types of critics in particular use this style of interpretation: Old Historical and New Historical. The former generally use a number of literary works to discuss the various influences of an era, while the latter do the reverse--use the era's influences, as well as the probable beliefs of the poet to aid in the understanding of a single work. You are to approach this research paper with the New Historical mindset.
In that regard you should try to discover as much of the following information as possible. Do NOT, though, limit yourself to the elements listed here.
Concerning the poet
Concerning his or her era
Concerning the paper
Be certain you do your absolute best, as the next assignment hinges on this one!
END HANDOUT 1
HANDOUT 2
(Based on ELA Exam Rubric)
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Rubric for Periodic and Biographical Research Paper |
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QUALITY LEVEL |
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1 |
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Meaning: comprehen-sion, analysis, and interpretation of task |
Student is able to demonstrate full comprehen-sion of task |
Relatively complete analysis of task |
Interpreted task well, but missed key points |
Significant errors in analysis, but adequate |
Poor interpreta-tion or analysis; comprehen-sion hindered |
Missed task and/or text meaning completely |
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Development elaboration of concept with specific and relevant evidence |
Provides an exceptional amount of information; ideas thoroughly explored |
Student has fully developed the ideas; few lapses in information |
Satisfactory amount of information |
Barely adequate; student has left out key points |
Very little support of main ideas |
No support of ideas |
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Organization follows the established criteria for a research paper |
Perfect in both organization and transition |
Nearly perfect with good transitions |
Appropriate organization with a few mistakes |
Mistakes in organization hinder comprehen-sion |
Information is in semi- relevant order |
Information is randomly placed |
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Language: shows awareness of audience through use of structure, variety |
Aware of audience; sophisti-cated language use |
Some language errors; good grasp of audience |
Acceptable language errors; attempts to reach audience |
Shows little awareness of audience; poor grammar |
Grammatical errors hinder comprehen-sion: No audience awareness |
Serious flaws, no comprehen- sion is possible |
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Conventions: exhibits conventional usage, spelling, and paragraphing skills |
Near perfect usage and spelling |
Few errors in usage and spelling |
Errors in usage, but without loss in comprehen-sion |
Some comprehen-sion is lost due to errors |
Comprehen- sion seriously hindered by mistakes |
Not clear; comprehen- sion is lost throughout the paper |
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Citations: extent to which the student provides appropriate documentation |
Works cited and paren-thetical documen-tation perfect |
Works cited punctuation errors; and parentheti-cal doc- umentation perfect |
Works cited has a few format errors; doc-umentation weak in some places |
Not enough document-ation; works cited has significant errors |
Little or no document-ation; works cited has serious flaws |
Works cited and paren-thetical doc-umentation are non- existent |
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END OF HANDOUT 2
Part II. Lesson 3+
Library and Computer Lab work.
Part II. Lesson "4"
Begin by handing out the worksheet below. The students completed a very similar one weeks before using "O Captain! My Captain!" and "The Road Not Taken". For that analysis they used the New Critical method. Ask them to now choose a poem by the poet they researched and analyze it on the handout.
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POETIC ANALYSIS |
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Directions: Complete the following worksheet as it relates to the poem you have chosen. Be certain to include line numbers. |
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Style of Poem: Why do you feel it was chosen?
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Rhythm: Style(s)/Importance:
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Rhyme Scheme: Importance:
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Sound elements and their importance (Alliteration, etc.) / Figurative language elements and their importance (Similes, Metaphors, etc.):
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Influential ideas / Literary and artistic works of the era:
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Significant events that may have influenced the poet while writing this work:
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What theme(s) do you think the poet was presenting to the reader?
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Unlike the previous interpretation, the students will have to work alone on this. Be certain that they have their research papers to assist them, and provide them with the entire period to work on it. Check at the end for accountability's sake. Those that have not finished should do so overnight.
Part III. Lesson 1
Part III. Lesson 2 (Culminating Project)
* Demonstrate using "The Road Not Taken"
* Demonstrate using "O Captain! My Captain"
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Rubric for Final Analysis Paper |
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QUALITY LEVEL |
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Meaning: comprehen-sion, analysis, and interpreta-tion of task |
Student is able to demonstrate full comprehen-sion of task |
Relatively complete analysis of task |
Interpreted task well, but missed key points |
Significant errors in analysis, but adequate |
Poor interpreta- tion or analysis; comprehen- sion hindered |
Missed task and/or text meaning completely |
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Development: elaboration of concept with specific and relevant evidence |
Provides an exceptional amount of information; ideas thoroughly explored |
Student has fully developed the ideas; few lapses in information |
Satisfactory amount of information |
Barely adequate; student has left out key points |
Very little support of main ideas |
No support of ideas |
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Organization follows the established criteria for a research paper |
Perfect in both organization and transition |
Nearly perfect with good transitions |
Appropriate organization with a few mistakes |
Mistakes in organization hinder comprehen- sion |
Information is in semi- relevant order |
Information is randomly placed |
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Language: shows awareness of audience through use of structure, variety |
Aware of audience; sophistic- ated language use |
Some language errors; good grasp of audience |
Acceptable language errors; attempts to reach audience |
Shows little awareness of audience; poor grammar |
Grammatical errors hinder comprehen- sion: No audience |
Serious flaws, no comprehen- sion is possible |
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Conventions: exhibits conventional usage, spelling, and paragraphing skills |
Near perfect usage and spelling |
Few errors in usage and spelling |
Errors in usage, but without loss in comprehen-sion |
Some comprehen-sion is lost due to errors |
Comprehen- sion seriously hindered by mistakes |
Not clear; comprehen- sion is lost throughout the paper |
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Once again, this unit is geared toward college-bound seniors. Students should already be adept readers with strong writing skills. They should also be comfortable with the library: both off-line references and those on-line. It is assumed that they have had some exposure to poetry and the various elements thereof, as well as computers as a word processing tool.
While various IEPs may be met, there is very little to which these students would be exposed that would cause them great difficulty. The word processing work would satisfy most grammar and spelling assistance requirements, the bane of most of these students. For the most part, though, this unit focuses not on the writing skills, as they are assumed. Rather it leans more toward organization, self-reliance and synthesis.
From the initiating activity to the completion of the final paper, this unit will take four to five weeks. It is actually dependent on the students' abilities and the media facilities to which they have access.
Students will be required to use the Internet, computerized encyclopedias and catalogs, periodical databases, and various LAN sites to gather information for their research paper. In addition, it is required that each of their papers is word-processed.