Title III Technology Literacy Challenge Grant

Learning Unit

Overview | Content Knowledge | Essential Questions | Connection To Standards | Initiating Activity | Learning Experiences | Culminating Performance | Pre-Requisite Skills | Modifications | Schedule/Time Plan | Technology Use

LU Title: Lost Lyrics of Love, Lust, and Losers

Author(s): Jonathan Cornue

Grade Level: 12

School : Rossetti Learning Center, Madison-Oneida BOCES

Topic/Subject Area: English Poetry

Address: 4937 Spring Road, P.O. Box 168, Verona, NY 13478-0168

Email: Jcornue@madison-bus-tech.moric.org

Phone/Fax:(315)361-5715/(315)361-5880

OVERVIEW

The term "poetry" is typically feared and despised by high school students, including those who have been exposed to it in previous grades. Initially, the key to this unit is to provide students with a connection between poetry and the "real world". Students will then be reminded of the elements used in poetic interpretation, and use them to analyze various texts. The final element involves research, and is truly the focus of the unit. It will be used to increase the students' analytical and organizational abilities, and introduce them to the "New Historical" (as opposed to the standard "New Critical") method of interpreting the text. Instilling the proverbial "love" for lyricism may not be possible, but we can teach them an appreciation for the art itself.

 

CONTENT KNOWLEDGE

Declarative

Procedural

Define elements of poetry 

Interpret poetry styles

Identify at least 5 styles of poetry

Write poems

Identify the works of at least 5 poets

Research a poet's life and era

Identify the steps of a research paper

Use internet for research

Recite information on a poet's life and era

Interpret a poem using New Critical and New Historical methods

Identify the difference between New Critical and New Historical poetic analysis

Write and edit a research paper

Define critical interpretation

 

ESSENTIAL QUESTIONS

Why is poetry an important part of a society?

How does poetry reflect the times?

How does the Internet influence our learning?

Why might different critics use different forms of interpretation?

 

 

CONNECTIONS TO NYS LEARNING STANDARDS
List Standard # and Key Idea #: Write out related Performance Indicator(s) or Benchmark(s)

MST #2, Key idea #1:

ELA #1: Language for Information and Understanding

 

ELA #2: Language for Literary Response and Expression

ELA #3: Language for Critical Analysis and Evaluation

ELA #4: Language for Social Interaction

 

INITIATING ACTIVITY

Students will sit in circles of 6-8. The teacher will provide each child with a piece of paper folded over seven times (so that it is about 1¼" x 8½"), then re-opened.

The teacher will provide the students with the following instructions:

"Listen to the following musical excerpts. After the first one, you will write an original, creative phrase or sentence based on that piece of music. This is to be written just BELOW the first crease on the paper in front of you. Then, you will fold the top piece of the paper down so that your line cannot be seen, and pass the paper to your right. We will then listen to another piece of music, and you will respond to that on the paper you just received, and pass THAT one to the right, and so on. Try to use imagery, but remember that you will only have 30 seconds after each piece has stopped to write your phrase and pass the paper."

At this point the teacher should quickly review imagery, and then demonstrate the process. Below is an example of the demonstration. 

Lyrics from Pink Floyd's song "Mother" "Hush, my baby, baby, don't you cry. Momma's gonna make all of your nightmares come true. Momma's gonna put all of her fears into you. Momma's gonna keep you right here under her wing. She won't let you fly, but she might let you sing. Momma's gonna keep Baby cozy and warm. Oooo Babe."

Original Line Based on "Mother" The midnight moonlight had faded, and the starlight's shine sank beneath the assault of the fast, furious clouds.

Point out to the students that the music and lyrics only PROMPTED the line. Therefore, not understanding the words does not limit their responses. Have students listen to eight (to allow for an occasional 'mind blank') "snippets" of songs based on "love", without telling them of the common theme. The students should continue to fold and pass the papers to their right until they are filled. After the filled pages are collected, the teacher should follow the same format using eight songs of "lust", and eight of "losers" (in life, love, luck, et al). Each section of song should be no longer then 30 seconds, and the students are only allowed an additional 30 seconds to write their line before passing the paper.

After the works have all been collected, pass them back to a DIFFERENT group. Each student will receive three unfolded "poems". Ask the students to read through the works in front of them, and choose their favorite to read aloud to the class, announcing a possible main idea, or theme. Be prepared for the silly, as often the lines simply do not flow together well.

If well planned and executed, this part of the lesson should take about 38-40 minutes: 3-4 minutes introduction and demonstration, 24 minutes music and writing, 10 minutes reading aloud, and an extra few shuffling the papers back and forth. Eliminating a selection or two from each section will obviously shorten the lesson. During the final few minutes of class, the teacher should indicate the fun that can be had with writing lyrics, and link poetry into the popular music culture.

Below are a list of artists and songs that you may wish to use. PREVIEW ALL MUSIC CAREFULLY!

Performer

Love

Lust

Losers

_____________

Queen

Crazy Little Thing Called Love

Lover Boy

I Want to Break Free

Nine Inch Nails

Get Down, Make Love

Head Like a Hole

Van Halen

Love Walks In

Tori Amos

Little Earthquakes

Me and a Gun

 

 

Sting

Moon Over Bourbon Street

Synchronicity

Billy Joel

Tell Her About It

Keepin' the Faith

Christie Lee

Eric Clapton

Wonderful Tonight

John Cougar

Cherry Bomb

Hurts so Good

Shania Twain

Still the One

You Have a Way with Me

Toby Keith

How Do You Like Me Now?

'N'Sync

Bye, Bye, Bye

Six Pence None the Richer

Kiss Me

Madonna

Like a Virgin

Harry Connick, Jr.

It Had to Be You

BB King

The Thrill Is Gone

 

 

 

LEARNING EXPERIENCES
In chronological order including acquisition experiences and extending/refining
experiences for all stated declarative and procedural knowledge.

PART I. --NEW CRITICAL ANALYSIS

Part I. Lesson 1

Element ------------------- Definition ---------------- Example ---------------------------------------

Imagery

Simile

Metaphor

Personification

Onomatopoeia

Hyperbole

Synecdoche

Alliteration

Assonance

Consonance

End Rhyme

Rhyme Scheme

Tone

Mood

Theme

Speaker

Rhythm

-iamb

-trochee

-anapest

-dactyl

-spondee

-pyrrhic

 

Work with students to define each of the above terms (with which they should already be familiar), and to create an example. As a practice, have the students write Original/Music in the space to the right of Example on the worksheet. With any time remaining in class, and for homework, have the students either create an original example of as many of the terms as possible, AND/OR find them in the lyrics of their songs. Do not expect this to be finished. They are to complete as many as possible, but this is only a review so that they have the opportunity to re-familiarize themselves with the terms and their functions.

 

Part I. Lesson 2 

Poetry can be broken down into various styles, based primarily on line count, rhythm, rhyme, and content. Give the following diagram.

POETRY

VERSE

NARRATIVE

Elegy

Free Verse

Blank Verse

Ode

Sonnet

Ballad

Epic

 

Part I. Lesson 3

QUIZ -- What is the predominant rhythm in "O Captain! My Captain"? What is the general rhyme scheme in "The Road Not Taken"? Name the poetic style of each work.

Iambic rhythms: "The bábbling bróok begán to bénd."

Iambic with spondaic: "The bábbling bróok bént báck."

Discuss the differences in the phrases.

 

 

POETIC ANALYSIS

Directions: Complete the following worksheet as it relates to the poem you have been given. Be certain to include line numbers.

Style of Poem: Why do you feel it was chosen?

 

 

 

Rhythm: Style(s)/Importance:

 

 

 

 

 

Rhyme Scheme: Importance:

 

 

 

 

Sound Elements and their Importance (Alliteration, etc.):

 

 

 

 

 

 

Figurative Language Elements and their Importance (Similes, Metaphors, etc.):

 

 

 

 

 

 

What theme(s) do you think the poet was presenting to the reader?

 

 

 

 

 

GROUP WORK RUBRIC

QUALITY LEVEL

4

3

2

1

Originality: the extent to which a student brings his/her own ideas to the group.

Student initiates ideas for the group to discuss

Student is quick to understand ideas and add to them

Student has few original ideas; mostly depends on the group

Student demonstrates no original thought; carried by group.

Participation: the extent to which a student assists in the group's assignment

Aids in leading group discussion

Discusses ideas, but does not aid in leading

Aids very little in making group decisions

Shows no effort; content to let others do the work

Cooperation: the extent to which each student works with others in the group.

Listens well to others; helps them grasp difficult ideas

Listens to others in the group; makes some attempt to help

Bullying with ideas or generally unresponsive

Unresponsive or disruptive

 

Use of Time: the extent to which a student effectively uses time in the group.

Entirely focussed on the task at hand

Mostly focussed, but drifts occasionally

"Chatty" or "spacey", easily diverted from the appropriate topic

Completely of task

 

 

Part I. Lesson 4

 

PART II. -- RESEARCH PAPER & NEW HISTORICAL ANALYSIS

Part II. Lesson 1

 

Part II. Lesson 2

HANDOUT 1

Periodic and Biographical Research Paper

Historical information relating to a poet and his or her time often provides the interpreter with sources that enhance the understanding of the poem. Two types of critics in particular use this style of interpretation: Old Historical and New Historical. The former generally use a number of literary works to discuss the various influences of an era, while the latter do the reverse--use the era's influences, as well as the probable beliefs of the poet to aid in the understanding of a single work. You are to approach this research paper with the New Historical mindset.

In that regard you should try to discover as much of the following information as possible. Do NOT, though, limit yourself to the elements listed here.

Concerning the poet

Concerning his or her era

Concerning the paper

Be certain you do your absolute best, as the next assignment hinges on this one!

END HANDOUT 1

 

HANDOUT 2

(Based on ELA Exam Rubric)

Rubric for Periodic and Biographical Research Paper

QUALITY LEVEL

6

5

4

3

2

1

Meaning: comprehen-sion, analysis, and interpretation of task

Student is able to demonstrate full comprehen-sion of task

Relatively complete analysis of task

Interpreted task well, but missed key points

Significant errors in analysis, but adequate

Poor interpreta-tion or analysis; comprehen-sion hindered

Missed task and/or text meaning completely

Development elaboration of concept with specific and relevant evidence

Provides an exceptional amount of information; ideas thoroughly explored

Student has fully developed the ideas; few lapses in information

Satisfactory amount of information

Barely adequate; student has left out key points

Very little support of main ideas

No support of ideas

Organization follows the established criteria for a research paper

Perfect in both organization and transition

Nearly perfect with good transitions

Appropriate organization with a few mistakes

Mistakes in organization hinder comprehen-sion

Information is in semi- relevant order

Information is randomly placed

Language: shows awareness of audience through use of structure, variety

Aware of audience; sophisti-cated language use

Some language errors; good grasp of audience

Acceptable language errors; attempts to reach audience

Shows little awareness of audience; poor grammar

Grammatical errors hinder comprehen-sion: No audience awareness

Serious flaws, no comprehen- sion is possible

Conventions: exhibits conventional usage, spelling, and paragraphing skills

Near perfect usage and spelling

Few errors in usage and spelling

Errors in usage, but without loss in comprehen-sion

Some comprehen-sion is lost due to errors

Comprehen- sion seriously hindered by mistakes

Not clear; comprehen- sion is lost throughout the paper

Citations: extent to which the student provides appropriate documentation

Works cited and paren-thetical documen-tation perfect

Works cited punctuation errors; and parentheti-cal doc- umentation perfect

Works cited has a few format errors; doc-umentation weak in some places

Not enough document-ation; works cited has significant errors

Little or no document-ation; works cited has serious flaws

Works cited and paren-thetical doc-umentation are non- existent

END OF HANDOUT 2

 Part II. Lesson 3+

Library and Computer Lab work.

 

Part II. Lesson "4"

Begin by handing out the worksheet below. The students completed a very similar one weeks before using "O Captain! My Captain!" and "The Road Not Taken". For that analysis they used the New Critical method. Ask them to now choose a poem by the poet they researched and analyze it on the handout.

POETIC ANALYSIS

Directions: Complete the following worksheet as it relates to the poem you have chosen. Be certain to include line numbers.

Style of Poem: Why do you feel it was chosen?

 

 

 

Rhythm: Style(s)/Importance:

 

 

 

 

 

Rhyme Scheme: Importance:

 

 

 

 

Sound elements and their importance (Alliteration, etc.) / Figurative language elements and their importance (Similes, Metaphors, etc.):

 

 

 

 

 

 

Influential ideas / Literary and artistic works of the era:

 

 

 

 

 

 Significant events that may have influenced the poet while writing this work:

 

 

 

 

 

 

What theme(s) do you think the poet was presenting to the reader?

 

 

 

 

Unlike the previous interpretation, the students will have to work alone on this. Be certain that they have their research papers to assist them, and provide them with the entire period to work on it. Check at the end for accountability's sake. Those that have not finished should do so overnight.

 

Part III. Lesson 1

 

Part III. Lesson 2 (Culminating Project)

* Demonstrate using "The Road Not Taken"

* Demonstrate using "O Captain! My Captain"

 

 

Rubric for Final Analysis Paper

QUALITY LEVEL

6

5

4

3

2

1

Meaning: comprehen-sion, analysis, and interpreta-tion of task

Student is able to demonstrate full comprehen-sion of task

Relatively complete analysis of task

Interpreted task well, but missed key points

Significant errors in analysis, but adequate

Poor interpreta- tion or analysis; comprehen- sion hindered

Missed task and/or text meaning completely

Development: elaboration of concept with specific and relevant evidence

Provides an exceptional amount of information; ideas thoroughly explored

Student has fully developed the ideas; few lapses in information

Satisfactory amount of information

Barely adequate; student has left out key points

Very little support of main ideas

No support of ideas

Organization follows the established criteria for a research paper

Perfect in both organization and transition

Nearly perfect with good transitions

Appropriate organization with a few mistakes

Mistakes in organization hinder comprehen- sion

Information is in semi- relevant order

Information is randomly placed

Language: shows awareness of audience through use of structure, variety

Aware of audience; sophistic- ated language use

Some language errors; good grasp of audience

Acceptable language errors; attempts to reach audience

Shows little awareness of audience; poor grammar

Grammatical errors hinder comprehen- sion: No audience

Serious flaws, no comprehen- sion is possible

Conventions: exhibits conventional usage, spelling, and paragraphing skills

Near perfect usage and spelling

Few errors in usage and spelling

Errors in usage, but without loss in comprehen-sion

Some comprehen-sion is lost due to errors

Comprehen- sion seriously hindered by mistakes

Not clear; comprehen- sion is lost throughout the paper

 

PRE-REQUISITE SKILLS

Once again, this unit is geared toward college-bound seniors. Students should already be adept readers with strong writing skills. They should also be comfortable with the library: both off-line references and those on-line. It is assumed that they have had some exposure to poetry and the various elements thereof, as well as computers as a word processing tool.

MODIFICATIONS

  While various IEPs may be met, there is very little to which these students would be exposed that would cause them great difficulty. The word processing work would satisfy most grammar and spelling assistance requirements, the bane of most of these students. For the most part, though, this unit focuses not on the writing skills, as they are assumed. Rather it leans more toward organization, self-reliance and synthesis.

UNIT SCHEDULE/TIME PLAN

  From the initiating activity to the completion of the final paper, this unit will take four to five weeks. It is actually dependent on the students' abilities and the media facilities to which they have access.

TECHNOLOGY USE

Students will be required to use the Internet, computerized encyclopedias and catalogs, periodical databases, and various LAN sites to gather information for their research paper. In addition, it is required that each of their papers is word-processed.